Today’s children are living under more pressure from the society than children in the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
We can no longer ignore that we live in an increasingly competitive world. Despite modern life's accomplishments and achievements, I totally agree with this idea because many people believe that societal pressure is increasing, and that children today are under greater strain than children in the past.
First of all, social media is one of these pressures. In recent years, there have been several reports of bullying or other forms of harassment on social media. children who spend more time on their phones looking at what is being communicated and can be beneficial, but there are also dangers associated with information, which causes children to believe incorrect information and is more likely to cause harm such as stress and loneliness. For example, parents have a habit of allowing their children to watch their phones while they are busy, which causes children to be easily harassed if they do not choose the right channel to watch; however, when compared to past generations of children, most of them prefer Play with friends with healthy activities.
Obviously, schools and families are also high-stress environments for children. one way to create this pressure is for parents and teachers to repeatedly tell children that their life will be like this and that they will be concerned about what could happen when they grow up. parents want their children to make in all areas, thus childhood today is much different from what our forebears had. For example, children are usually compelled to take part in activities that are uninteresting to them, or parents push their children to study by the advice. Therefore, children in this day and age are constantly under pressure, fear and competition.
To conclude, people, especially children, under a lot of pressure in today's culture. children were formerly thought to be innocent beings who could do no wrong. because today's culture is much more competitive and critical, children can't help but feel pressure to make those expectations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1688.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20987654321 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75190973027 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598765432099 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.6865351082 49.4020404114 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.571428571 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1428571429 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07142857143 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.357311551412 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122570922301 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0795981154226 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229819862024 0.151304729494 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.043164472968 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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