Many claim that the fast food industry had a negative effect on the environment, eating habits, and families.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is certainly true that with the rapid development of technology, people have more preferred to eat out-side food rather than traditional food. Many people think that fast food are creating many problem as families, eating habit and environment, as far as I completely agree with this statement with reasonable example.
Firstly, Fast food industry is changing pattern of food in the world. It can be seen that nowadays all family do not take a lunch/dinner with each other, which can less possibility to learn about sharing and caring. In past, all family member had arrived to home, after they started to eat their meals,which could learn about how to distribute food each other and share their daily routing. However, today's generation people eat their meal in their personal room and they do not share with their family member.
Secondly, due to the hectic schedule of family, most of official person prefer to eat junk food in nearest shop. By this I means that both parents are official person, so they have not time to cook traditional food in early morning as a result most of their family member depend to outside food, which can badly impact on their healthy lifestyles and started a diseases as diabetes, blood pressure, cancer and etc.
Last but not least, transport is essential role for fast food industry for deliver their ram material for big company, which can increase traffic as well as air pollution. For example, nowadays domino's are delivering their bread related item in whole world, which increased traffic and more air pollution.
In recapitulation, although there are contrasting view regarding fast food industry, as far as I concerned that fast food industry is badly impact to environment, eating habit and families, which explained reason.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 193, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun problem seems to be countable; consider using: 'many problems'.
Suggestion: many problems
...eople think that fast food are creating many problem as families, eating habit and environme...
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Line 2, column 216, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'In the past'?
Suggestion: In the past
...lity to learn about sharing and caring. In past, all family member had arrived to home,...
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Line 2, column 301, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , which
...e, after they started to eat their meals,which could learn about how to distribute foo...
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Line 3, column 97, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'in the nearest'.
Suggestion: in the nearest
...official person prefer to eat junk food in nearest shop. By this I means that both parents...
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Line 3, column 123, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1]
Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'mean'
Suggestion: mean
...at junk food in nearest shop. By this I means that both parents are official person, ...
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Line 3, column 359, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a disease' or simply 'diseases'?
Suggestion: a disease; diseases
...on their healthy lifestyles and started a diseases as diabetes, blood pressure, cancer and...
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Line 3, column 406, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
...ses as diabetes, blood pressure, cancer and etc. Last but not least, transport is essen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, for example, i mean, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1483.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0614334471 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58484603424 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566552901024 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.7425176721 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.818181818 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6363636364 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6363636364 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228941228522 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100450051247 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632845644443 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134608226554 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0606701554908 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.