Movies and computer games containing violence are popular. Some people say they have a negative effect on society and should be censored. Others say they are just harmless relaxation. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
The industries of entertainment have experienced an enormous increase of popularity and have changed throughout the history. Violent films and computer games that are enjoyed a lot by many people, are believed to be harmful and need to be limited by laws and restrictions, while some still tend to see them as a safe method to rest. Although brutal visuals can effect certain players, I believe that they help to prevent many crimes from happening.
On the one hand, sensitive people can be traumatised by the images containing violence. It means that many children might suffer from phobias in their future after they experience fear watching a horror movie. This is why there has to be more ways of preventing potentially harmful content being seen by mentally vulnerable youngsters and adults. For example, HSE scientific community claimed that a participant of the experiment, who had troubles with overreacting to stress situations, faced sleeping issues after playing Until Dawn. Therefore, the accessibility of brutal and aggressive videos and games should be limited as they might cause harm to certain groups of people.
On the other hand, computer games serve as a deterrent for teenagers who can express their anger without hurting anybody. This is because murder of a virtual character is not against the law; and the hormones of the developing organism will not lead to an actual crime. Therefore many potential criminals decide to indulge in online shooters without resorting to violence in real life. For instance, the Moscow police reports demonstrated a significant drop in the number of murder attempts in 1995 upon the introduction of computer games to Russia. Thus, digital violence is a great tool to fight actual aggression and damage.
Even though savage content can cause mental harm to some people, I am of an opinion that many others use it to express emotions without real violence and damage to society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 271, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, still, therefore, thus, while, as to, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1626.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1619047619 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7580597209 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615873015873 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.1286992387 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.142857143 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180250806957 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0566478914392 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0344968982663 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102955426254 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0296614097371 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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