For ages, art has been an irreplaceable way of expressing feelings and thoughts. Moreover, artistic creations can reflect one's uniqueness or even display a cultural identity. Nonetheless, music, dancing, acting or painting has been losing their position in society currently due to the advancement of science, high technology and modern entrepreneurship. This essay will discuss some identified causes that lead to this phenomenon and possible solutions that may make a change.
Basically, there are some particular reasons why individuals put remunerative sectors above arts. First of all, business, science and technology are essential subjects for most career paths. In actual fact, there are a wider range of job opportunities in those fields than in art. Additionally, scientists have a tendency to receive higher salaries and be more stable in their work compared to a painter, for instance. Secondly, a busy lifestyle avoids us spending time creating pieces of art. In other words, people have been under a lot of pressure recently, some of those can be named as projects of work, family issues or paying bills. Therefore, they have to work hard and get less free time, expressing their emotions by writing a song or drawing a picture becomes impossible somehow. Last but not least, even if they have time to let their hair down, they might want to play videogames or surf the Net, as technology has been becoming more and more popular.
However, ignorance of art's importance can be solved by some practical ways. First and foremost, raising human's awareness of respecting human creative skill and imagination, as well as encouraging them to produce works to demonstrate the beauty and emotional power. Furthermore, more competitions or workshops need to be organized to attract community attention, and also create more jobs in this sector. Lastly, to promote the arts, the government should provide financial support for artists together with building more museums, art galleries or opera houses to increase public's interest in art. Thus, some exhibitions in my city allow visitors to make their own painting and then display it in one special area.
In conclusion, art is an indispensable thing for our spiritual life but has been losing its popularity for some reasons. We need to take some actions, especially which are mentioned above, to get our fascination in art back.
For ages, art has been an irreplaceable way of expressing feelings and thoughts. Moreover, artistic creations can reflect one's uniqueness or even display a cultural identity. Nonetheless, music, dancing, acting or painting has been losing their position in society currently due to the advancement of science, high technology and modern entrepreneurship. This essay will discuss some identified causes that lead to this phenomenon and possible solutions that may make a change.
Basically, there are some particular reasons why individuals put remunerative sectors above arts. First of all, business, science and technology are essential subjects for most career paths. In actual fact, there are a wider range of job opportunities in those fields than in art. Additionally, scientists have a tendency to receive higher salaries and be more stable in their work compared to a painter, for instance. Secondly, a busy lifestyle avoids us spending time creating pieces of art. In other words, people have been under a lot of pressure recently, some of those can be named as projects of work, family issues or paying bills. Therefore, they have to work hard and get less free time, expressing their emotions by writing a song or drawing a picture becomes impossible somehow. Last but not least, even if they have time to let their hair down, they might want to play videogames or surf the Net, as technology has been becoming more and more popular.
However, ignorance of art's importance can be solved by some practical ways. First and foremost, raising human's awareness of respecting human creative skill and imagination, as well as encouraging them to produce works to demonstrate the beauty and emotional power. Furthermore, more competitions or workshops need to be organized to attract community attention, and also create more jobs in this sector. Lastly, to promote the arts, the government should provide financial support for artists together with building more museums, art galleries or opera houses to increase public's interest in art. Thus, some exhibitions in my city allow visitors to make their own painting and then display it in one special area.
In conclusion, art is an indispensable thing for our spiritual life but has been losing its popularity for some reasons. We need to take some actions, especially which are mentioned above, to get our fascination in art back.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 123, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...oreover, artistic creations can reflect ones uniqueness or even display a cultural i...
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Line 3, column 195, Rule ID: ACTUAL_EXPERIENCE[1]
Message: Use simply 'fact'.
Suggestion: fact
...tial subjects for most career paths. In actual fact, there are a wider range of job opportu...
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Line 3, column 570, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this can' or 'those cans'?
Suggestion: this can; those cans
...der a lot of pressure recently, some of those can be named as projects of work, family is...
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Line 3, column 966, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...as been becoming more and more popular. However, ignorance of arts importance ca...
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Line 5, column 105, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'humans'' or 'human's'?
Suggestion: humans'; human's
...tical ways. First and foremost, raising humans awareness of respecting human creative ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, lastly, may, moreover, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2013.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 383.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25587467363 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.883996096 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 249.0 176.041082164 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650130548303 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 634.5 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6454519883 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.947368421 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1578947368 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5263157895 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302322239296 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0873623887964 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105081190489 0.0667982634062 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198357799941 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.152278327067 0.056905535591 268% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 78.4519038076 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.