Many people believe that zoos have no purpose in today’s world and should be closed. What problems do zoos bring? What are the alternatives to zoos if they are closed?
Recently there has been a popular opinion suggesting that zoos should be closed for its purposeless existence. In my opinion, I believe that these sites pose great threats to animals and there are several substitutes that can solve the problems that zoos bring.
As almost all of the zoo animals are wild creatures, zoo environment would cause adverse effects on these animals, both physically and mentally. Firstly, since zoos are normally constructed inside cities or urban areas, the animals have to inhabit in small and enclosed surroundings. As a result, these animals supposedly living in the jungles cannot freely move or run around, which would deteriorate their immune systems and make them more prone to illnesses and diseases. In addition, noise pollution caused by traffic, constructions and human are conducive to animals’ mental disorder like anxiety and nervousness. These disorders are proved by scientists to be factors affecting animals’ reproduction cycle. When in long exposure to such detrimental habitat, these wild animals may be in danger of extinction.
To tackle these problems, governments should shut down zoos and utilize nature reserves as well as various forms of media to educate people about animals. First of all, nature reserves or conservative parks are generally set up in rural areas where there is few buildings or homes. Wildlife creatures are then allowed to inhabit in considerably more spacious and diverse living environment, thus having more chances of growing healthily. Furthermore, these rural area parks being far away from metropolitans would create a tranquil landscape for fragile animals. Another good idea is that governments create animal discovery programs on a variety of media, so that people can learn about the ecosystem from distance. For example, in the USA, there are channels like Discovery channel on television and radio produced for the learning purpose of students.
In conclusion, zoos do a serious amount of harm to wild animals and appropriate steps need to be taken to alter the bad impacts of zoos.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, so, then, thus, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1759.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36280487805 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79665915409 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637195121951 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 561.6 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.1522497107 49.4020404114 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 117.266666667 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8666666667 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20141718137 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0667520318634 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672593936988 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139761811206 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0704668387114 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.21 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 78.4519038076 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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