The table below shows how young people in Tokyo, Japan listened to music over the previous month. The pie chart shows a record company’s international findings about whether people preferred live or recorded music.
The table provides information about how male and female Japanese in Tokyo used different technology to enjoy music over a month. The pie chart illustrates the proportion of whether people opt for live or recorded music.
Overall, man in Japan seemed to listen to music over various devices than their counterpart, especially in MP3 category, while female figures, which are lower than 50% in all type of technology, show that they are not fond of music. In addition, according to the pie chart, it seems that a vast majority of people have preference in live music.
MP3 players was the most prevalent device used by male Japanese. To be precise, 79% of them listen to music on this technology, this number is almost double the female figure. In contrast, CDs has the lowest proportion in both genders, 19% for male and 22% for female. It is noticeable the live music, mp3 players and the internet share almost identical percentage in young female demographic, with 44%, 40% and 42% respectively. In addition, the internet take up to 55% of male listener, while live music is slightly higher with 60%.
Regarding the pie chart, only a quarter of the respondent said that they prefer recorded music, meanwhile this number is about two-third for live music. In order words, there is 25% people, who asked, enjoy recorded one and 70% for live music. Furthermore, a minority of people (4%) is uncertain about what they like.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, regarding, third, while, in addition, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1189.0 965.302439024 123% => OK
No of words: 242.0 196.424390244 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9132231405 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59364928185 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 106.607317073 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578512396694 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 369.9 283.868780488 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4455815827 43.030603864 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0833333333 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1666666667 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.23603664747 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.39552965123 0.215688989381 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140510835536 0.103423049105 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10342120081 0.0843802449381 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.260018773283 0.15604864568 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109761200545 0.0819641961636 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 40.7170731707 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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