Although it is generally prohibited, corporal punishment persists in many families. Do you think corporal punishment is an acceptable way to regulate children’s behaviors?
Physical punishment nowadays still exists negatively among a number of families even though it is already forbidden. It is such an unacceptable way to educate children due to its influences on their development.
The primary reason why I oppose this idea is that physical punishment may cause serious harm to children. In fact, parents can not always control their discipline appropriately, thus, some methods used to correct the offspring's behavior may turn into abuse and violence. Spanks, for instance, are widely accepted by many parents, yet unfortunately, most parents tend to hit harder when their children recommit the offense, hence the pain and injuries over them. In addition, several adults can not dominate their mood, then, they unexpectedly hit vulnerable parts such as the head or chest that put the child's physical health in jeopardy.
Another worth noting point is that corporal punishment has an adverse impact on mental health. Once children are exposed to intense and frequent physical punishment, they are more likely to feel hated and disregarded by adults, therefore, they may experience depression, anxiety, or hopelessness. Moreover, children can also lose their natural courage and motivation to try new ideas or hinder their imagination and creativity since they are confined to doing things with permission. In the long term, physical punishment will trigger off behavioral problems, for example, becoming aggressive and attacking siblings and peers or even forming antisocial behaviors such as thefts, robbery, and vandalism.
In conclusion, corporal punishment should not be a reasonable way to adjust children's conduct owing to its effects on both physical and emotional growth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, may, moreover, so, still, then, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1459.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54752851711 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87359914284 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.688212927757 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0926351783 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.636363636 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9090909091 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0909090909 7.06120827912 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224529033191 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0841983240655 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.059182961203 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144016608816 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0366158178176 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.21 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.0 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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