Government officials should rely on their own judgment rather than unquestioningly carry out the will of the people they serve.
Whether government should rely on their own judgement or should take the requests of the citizens of the society, is a debateable topic. Government is established by the society people and it is vital that the government undertake the requests of the individuals. However, it's not feasible to consider each and every requests of individuals because it will further result in deadlocks or conflicts. Therefore, I believe that the decisions made by the government bodies should go hand in hand with the public.
Suppose the society citizens demand to built a flyover, while on the other hand, there are several other people requesting something different, then this will result in a clash and it would be incomprehensible for the government body to make a choice. A several year long conflict of standing a Temple or a Mosque at Ayodhya in India is a perfect example that fits the context. Many muslims demanded the government to built a Mosque while the Hindus requested to built a Temple as it was known to be the land of Lord Rama. Government changed during this period, but this issue remained to be a conflict untill the correct ones were given justice. This denotes that, the government bodies should circumspect the situation completely and not just undecidedly act and fulfill the public demands.
Shall the government be banished by the public if they do not fulfill their demands? I think not, because it is not the case always that the government will suffice every public demand. If they tend to do so, this would require a lot of time for them to spent every requests that will delay the decisions for the several important and ongoing issues. For instance, at present time of the Covid-19 situation, already the world is facing several issues related to hospitals, low finance, decreasing GDP and many more. Now if the public is demanding an unnecessary request then it would not be feasible for the government to indulge themselves in this insignificant problems. Rather, it's important to provide people to overcome the more important problems and also to be profetic to think about the upcomming issues that the society might face.
However, the government comprises of the individuals that have been elceted by the society members, the government should not be harsh to deny the requests of the individuals entirely. At least the government body should listen to the requests of every person so that they could differentite the common problems from the personal ones and could act quickly to resolve the most common issues. If they do deny the public requests then, it would evocate the memory of the monarchy and would create prejudices among the people of the society. This will further engender other trivial problems. Hence, it's important that the government and the public should be in agreement and should compromise when it is required.
To sum, the government and the public should be in harmony and should think before they act or request respectively. Otherwise, it would raise unnecessary complications that would not lead to any appropriate results.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 25, Rule ID: COMPRISES_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'comprises' or 'consists of'?
Suggestion: comprises; consists of
... might face. However, the government comprises of the individuals that have been elceted ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, then, therefore, while, at least, for instance, i think, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 26.0 12.4196629213 209% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 33.0505617978 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 12.9106741573 170% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2577.0 2235.4752809 115% => OK
No of words: 512.0 442.535393258 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.033203125 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.75682846001 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74466743164 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 215.323595506 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.447265625 0.4932671777 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 792.9 704.065955056 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5718287083 60.3974514979 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.136363636 118.986275619 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2727272727 23.4991977007 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.95454545455 5.21951772744 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 5.13820224719 214% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206497076093 0.243740707755 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0725002078185 0.0831039109588 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0554206492194 0.0758088955206 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136553589551 0.150359130593 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0493008165384 0.0667264976115 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 48.8420337079 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.1639044944 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 100.480337079 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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