Recent figures show an increase in violent crime among youngsters under the age of 18. Some psychologists claim that the basic reason for this is that children these days are not getting the social and emotional learning they need from parents and teachers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is true that an inclination toward underage crimes is caused by the insufficient social and emotional skills taught by parents and teachers. However, some violence is also influenced by children's social circle.
Some criminals done by youngsters aged 18 and under are sometimes found as they do not receive social and emotional knowledge from their guardians. This is because some parents and teachers are prone to focus on academic records only, resulting in children having a lack of moral understanding. According to a study conducted by the Harvard School of Education, 70% of underage criminals in Manhattan, NYC was found to have good grades. However, another reason was found that they had strict parents who always pushed them to get good grades no matter what.
On the other hand, underaged violence is also influenced by children's social peers. This is caused by the sense of entitlement on them to feel belonged, so that they will do anything in order to fit in with their peers, including doing the bad acts. For instance, more than 50% of bullies in Cleveland Highschool admitted that they bullied their friends because they want to be invited to consider the most exclusive groups at school. In order to achieve that goal, the children needed to copy the member of the groups which mostly liked to bully others.
In all, even though some children criminals are caused by the inability of parents and teachers to cultivate morals on the pupils' mindset, however, some crimes were also caused by external factors such as a social circle. It is better for guardians to always cultivate good values in their children.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 124, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'pupils'' or 'pupil's'?
Suggestion: pupils'; pupil's
...and teachers to cultivate morals on the pupils mindset, however, some crimes were also...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, so, for instance, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1381.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02181818182 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5581501581 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563636363636 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2210082663 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.083333333 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9166666667 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.91666666667 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260589382594 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0931493336987 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.059809373366 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156345216668 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0427405986819 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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