The diagrams below give information on transport and car use in Edmonton. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The comparison in four different transports and car use because of some extents in Edmonton is displayed in the bar chart and table, shown in percentage.
Overall, car is the most popular transport among Edmonton population compared to other modes. Furthermore, people are most likely to commute to work by driving this vehicle.
As per data, the vast majority of persons in this city drive car, showing the rate at almost a half. When it comes to other transportation modes, the proportion of people taking Light Rail Transport accounts for over a third, being higher than that of those using bus and cab which are similar at one in ten.
Turning to people's reasons of car use, it is most dominated by commuters to go working, with the percentage at more than five in ten. Meanwhile, the figure for taking children to school makes up two fifths, being lower than that for business, with a gap of a twentieth. Turning to shopping and leisure activities, both extents show an identical proportion at three in twenty.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 12, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'people'.
Suggestion: people
...re similar at one in ten. Turning to peoples reasons of car use, it is most dominate...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, third, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 850.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 175.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85714285714 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64810136066 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651428571429 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.460816099 43.030603864 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.25 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.875 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.125 5.23603664747 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131476928932 0.215688989381 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0576907379101 0.103423049105 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.053682593018 0.0843802449381 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0904440562286 0.15604864568 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0442432682945 0.0819641961636 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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