Some people from poor and rural backgrounds find it difficult to get a university education. Universities should make it easier for such groups to enroll. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, higher education becomes luxurious and only accessible to the wealthy city dwellers in any civilization. As education is a solid foundation and reputation of a nation, every resident, wherever they are coming from, should have equal rights to get entry into academic institutions. As far as my opinion is concerned, I agree this notion to a great extent, and the reasons why I say so shall be explained in the following paragraphs.
To commence with, these days, people find it difficult to get a job unless they have a certificate or a degree from a university, especially it is almost impossible for the rural inhabitants. Most of the institutes are located in the city center, which is at a far distance from the countryside, thus, they could not get a proper schooling, which will turn to a flaw for their career advancement in the future. To tackle this, the government should allocate more fundings to the accountable authorities not only to establish rural academies, but also to improve the transportation between rural and urban districts.
Moreover, it is undeniable that the role of educated citizens is crucial for the development of a country in every perspective. In other words, an intellectual can appreciably lower the national impoverishment, and help the economic growth. By the fact that the literacy rate is directly proportionate to the communal well-being, government should amend educational legislation to make sure that each and every inhabitant inside a nation shall get equal chances for tertiary education, for instance, by imposing a law to provide free education for the penniless people.
To sum up, education is a keystone and fundamental element for both every single individual and nation. For that reason, I strongly believe that everyone should acquire easy access to the college education and the university enrollment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, thus, well, for instance, in other words, to sum up, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1578.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24252491694 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12073507821 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614617940199 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.9203878454 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.454545455 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3636363636 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24538743318 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0801579381974 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509022890705 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134855690728 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0221087982502 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.91 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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