Have YOU ever fallen in love? Someone said that: “The best and most beautiful things in this world cannot be seen or even heard but must be felt with the heart.” So it will be ideal if YOU have love at the most beautiful time of YOUth, which is college.
Above all, At this stage YOU can learn to love without prejudice and intention. In this stage, student’s awareness of themselves and others is more obvious, so they will not be influenced by social norms that lead to misjudgment of others. In the university environment, people have not experienced the negative side of society, so they come to love with a sincere and warm heart.
The following positive point is that college students will be able to tackle the first challenges of life together. University is a door that opens up many new things along with temptations and difficulties, so a partner will always be there to help to overcome that. Therefore, being in a romance in undergraduate encourages YOU to be more tolerant, compassionate, and less selfish than YOU would have been when YOU were Younger.It would also be great to have a companion to explore brand-new things in a current environment.
However, some individuals are concerned that undergraduate love has a number of negative consequences, such as an adverse impact on education, mental illness, drop out of school and premarital pregnancy. However, collegiate love is not absolutely negative; we should love wisely, knowing how to protect ourselves and balance romance in our circumstances. To have beautiful love, we need to respect and love both our partner and ourselves.
Indeed, falling in love in college will be a marvelous thing if students love seriously, wisely and sincerely. College love is a beautiful feeling that we should experience once in our life.
Have YOU ever fallen in love? Someone said that: “The best and most beautiful things in this world cannot be seen or even heard but must be felt with the heart.” So it will be ideal if YOU have love at the most beautiful time of YOUth, which is college.
Above all, At this stage YOU can learn to love without prejudice and intention. In this stage, student’s awareness of themselves and others is more obvious, so they will not be influenced by social norms that lead to misjudgment of others. In the university environment, people have not experienced the negative side of society, so they come to love with a sincere and warm heart.
The following positive point is that college students will be able to tackle the first challenges of life together. University is a door that opens up many new things along with temptations and difficulties, so a partner will always be there to help to overcome that. Therefore, being in a romance in undergraduate encourages YOU to be more tolerant, compassionate, and less selfish than YOU would have been when YOU were Younger.It would also be great to have a companion to explore brand-new things in a current environment.
However, some individuals are concerned that undergraduate love has a number of negative consequences, such as an adverse impact on education, mental illness, drop out of school and premarital pregnancy. However, collegiate love is not absolutely negative; we should love wisely, knowing how to protect ourselves and balance romance in our circumstances. To have beautiful love, we need to respect and love both our partner and ourselves.
Indeed, falling in love in college will be a marvelous thing if students love seriously, wisely and sincerely. College love is a beautiful feeling that we should experience once in our life.
- It is said that studying ATC program is a bad decision While I agree that it can have many disadvantages I also believe that it has a bunch of advantages On the one hand I know that English for Banking and finance program has some disadvantages especially 56
- Some people claim that it is a good idea to fall in love in college But in fact what people fail to realize is dating at the age of a student can have a number of disadvantages Firstly one might the most critical object here is that the Young may suffer f 67
- The curriculum plays an important role for every student at the university in general and the English for Banking and Finance at the Banking Academy in particular It determines the achievement and career of each learner It is often argued that attending t 89
- Student love is often beautiful and romantic it becomes colorful memories in student life Some people believe everyone should experience love during their time in university However falling in love doesn t play an important part when YOU re in college bec 73
- Have YOU have had a sense of loneliness every Christmas Eves or felt jealous to YOUR friend when he or her was presented Valentine Day s gift Love in YOUR air but not everyone could realize it even though YOU have ever felt head over heels in love with so 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 431, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
...U would have been when YOU were Younger.It would also be great to have a companion...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, therefore, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1506.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98675496689 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90315596336 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58940397351 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.3678721722 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.846153846 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2307692308 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07692307692 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.622928002463 0.244688304435 255% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.209128301295 0.084324248473 248% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.201881350193 0.0667982634062 302% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.357752822696 0.151304729494 236% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.282098270075 0.056905535591 496% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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