You have a Facebook friend living in another country and s/he is curious to learn about a major news item in your country.
Write a letter to your Facebook friend. In your letter
describe a news story in your country
explain why people are interested in it
say how the story personally relates to you
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear ...,
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Nikita,
I'm so happy to hear from you other than Facebook platform. I read about the news that you mentioned in your letter.
I quickly turned on the news channel on my television set after reading your letter and was taken aback by this tragic incident. The anchor described that Nirbhaya (victim) was heading alone from college to her hostel. This poor girl was kidnapped by a group of men who later raped her aggressively. This was shocking to me as I live in the same country.
This news has now spread like a wild-fire because the victim is currently in the hospital who is barely surviving. The public are interested to know whether she will be able to make or not. Also, most of us are keen to know when will the police arrest the offenders?
This article has particularly affected me a lot. As you know, I live in a hostel and travel late hours after finishing my shift. I feel daunted travelling alone because I feel very unsafe now. I wish the government provides special facilities to females like us so that we are free to move around the city at any hour.
I advise you to keep a pepper spray with you and be safe.
Warmest regards,
Pallavi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
Dear Nikita, Im so happy to hear from you other than Fa...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...to me as I live in the same country. This news has now spread like a wild-fire be...
^^^^
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...o move around the city at any hour. I advise you to keep a pepper spray with ...
^
Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ' the Warmest'.
Suggestion: The Warmest
...a pepper spray with you and be safe. Warmest regards, Pallavi
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, i feel, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 966.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 213.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53521126761 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4081990186 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647887323944 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 305.1 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.4490234597 44.8134815571 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.4 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.49484536082 468% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151702827243 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.050578853193 0.0766984524023 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0895320807771 0.0603063233224 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0907106195173 0.12726935374 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.089466108052 0.0580467560999 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.46 8.71597938144 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.