in some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. why might this be the case? do you think is a positive or negative situation?
Some citizens believe that homeownership is essential in their life, while renting a home have its drawback. This is to say, owning a home brings a sense of stability and it has a positive impact.
It is understandable to believe that owning a home rather than renting a home provide more stability in one's life. People would concentrate on their life plans since they might not have to pay for a relocation or a rental. For instance, the youngster who owning a beautiful house, they can start to form a family, a home can serve as a heaven for children and adults alike. Moreover, without thinking about cost for home rental, a family can make an education plan for their children. As a consequence, people who own a home are more successful and happier.
Moving ahead, the reason why owning a property has a positive development than renting a house because it provides a chance for investment. Subsequently, the overall cost of house selling price slightly increasing year by year. As the demand for homes rises, so does the price. In a case, the average price of a house in Jakarta currently starts at 500 million rupiah, which is higher than last year's price of 300 million rupiah. For this reason, it is a terrific chance for young adults to own a home and maybe start a business in real estate.
To sum up, there a great experience if individuals wish to own a house rather to rent one since they would have more stability in their lives. However, residents should never buy a house than they can afford as it is has consequences
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 105, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...enting a home provide more stability in ones life. People would concentrate on their...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, moreover, so, while, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1274.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6496350365 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66077167341 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551094890511 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.0140711816 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.0 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5714285714 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303284825819 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110051889385 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614047099572 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173095634251 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0500868754893 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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