Nowadays the increase amount of garbage is really a concern. Why is this happening and what can be done for resolving this.
This a fact that waste disposal has become an serious issue in these days. While i believe that there are some potential reasons of this development, a number of effective measures can be taken to eliminate this problem.
On the one hand, a number of factors are contributing in this trend. Firstly, worldwide population is increasing day by day that is the major cause of creating more garbage as in this materialistic world individuals use a range of goods, products and appliances and after utilizing they throw in the trash bins. Therefore, rising population is responsible for the large amount of waste material at present. Secondly, All the large and small companies make efforts to launch innovative product items into the markets as due to the developments in technology new researches are made by scientists to bring more convenient products that results in replacing outdated commodities with new ones. Consequently, people use more latest tools instead of traditional ones. Finally, large enterprises are also accountable for the rubbish as in industries waste a lot of materials as there is huge damage by wearing and tearing of items that leads to problems in the treatment of broken items.
On the other hand, there are some advanced methods that can be applied to cure these concerns. First of all, recycling of unwanted items is the best way to reduce the damage as in this way the material can be reused instead of dumping or burning that spreads pollution in environment. For example, plastic bottles and cans can be utilized in manufacturing more items again and it is difficult to dispose off these plastic goods. In addition to this, people, especially, young ones should be encouraged to make the optimum use of products before purchasing new ones as it will reduce the circulation of garbage as well as save their monetary resources.
To conclude, although i think that disposing wastage has become an global issue, it can be mitigated by using reliable measures:
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 44, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...s a fact that waste disposal has become an serious issue in these days. While i be...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...e an serious issue in these days. While i believe that there are some potential r...
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Line 3, column 717, Rule ID: MOST_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use only 'latest' (without 'more') when you use the superlative.
Suggestion: latest
...with new ones. Consequently, people use more latest tools instead of traditional ones. Fina...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'more the latest'.
Suggestion: more the latest
...with new ones. Consequently, people use more latest tools instead of traditional ones. Fina...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ary resources. To conclude, although i think that disposing wastage has become...
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Line 7, column 65, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...think that disposing wastage has become an global issue, it can be mitigated by us...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for example, i think, in addition, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1666.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04848484848 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82625757214 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569696969697 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 537.3 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.6248612334 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.153846154 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3846153846 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.6923076923 7.06120827912 194% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233806753365 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0815540130631 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513110847628 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141395335381 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0584461400025 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.