Technology has effects on relationships.What do you think these effects are positive or negative?
The impact of technology on relationships which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while others reject this notion. The substantial influence of this trend has now sparked controversy over the potential impact in recent years. In my opinion, technology came as a boon for many. This essay will further elaborate my views for favoring the positive impact of this trend and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
Analyzing the statement and explaining further, the first and foremost reason is that technology has made the world a contracted ball. Where each and any can communicate with their relatives and friends from anywhere to everywhere thus, helping people to strengthen the bond of their relation. Another striking benefit in this regard is that with the help of technology people can now connect with strangers through social media websites. For example, there are so many matrimonial websites where people can find their mates easily and it is seen that relationships made online are successful.
Probing ahead, one of the main underlying reasons stems from the fact is that today work pressure and sedentary jobs oblige people to stay at their homes and hence making it difficult for them to give time to family and friends which ultimately causes depression. So, technology paves the way for such people to stay connected with the closed ones.
To cap it up, assert that technology has made it possible in every way not only to stay connected with loved ones but also in establishing new relationships.
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also, but, first, hence, if, so, then, thus, while, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1333.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24803149606 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91271457406 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606299212598 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 63.0 20.2975951904 310% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 161.156755986 49.4020404114 326% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 333.25 106.682146367 312% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 63.5 20.7667163134 306% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 19.5 7.06120827912 276% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0775154307861 0.244688304435 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0509227975607 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0205000777572 0.0667982634062 31% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0509227975607 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0205000777572 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 35.0 13.0946893788 267% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 7.53 50.2224549098 15% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.9 11.3001002004 247% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.06 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.18 8.58950901804 130% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 9.78957915832 312% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 27.2 10.1190380762 269% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 10.7795591182 260% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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