Some people think that the Government should decide which subjects ,students should study at university while others think that students should be allowed to apply for the subject they prefer.Disscuss the two views and give your opinion
Many people believe that leaders have full right to decide that in which subject student should resume their higher studies, however other think that pupils must be fully allowed to choose the subject to learn in which they are interested. I will discus both views and give my opinion.
Al most everyone consider that government have to decide what student have to learn in their university life, because it will be more beneficial for them in their future in getting jobs which may be help full for their achievements as well as for their employment carrier also. For example, in 1998 Uk leaders of education has announced that student have to apply in course which government has decide for them according to their marks in previous schooling in results students were more success full and the employment rate was 68.5 which was 2 times higher than before. Governments design can also turn around student's life.
On the other hand, some people are in favour of that student must be free to select subject which they love to study, because it will be more easier for them to learn and to understand properly because learner can pick those subjects in which they comfortable, moreover sometimes students who choose subject under pressure of their parents they are mostly unable to achieve their goals. For example, recent news paper was showing that in 2016-17 Indian has recorded most number of suicide my students of university student's because guardian’s was forcing them to study in engineering not the subject they are favouring to learn. Giving free hand to students can save their life.
To sum up, deciding by government what to learn for students may have some goods, but choosing subject by student will safe their life. In my opinion learner must be allowed to enrol in course they want to study because everyone has their choice what to learn. Learning is fun but if its ur choice
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 273, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...as well as for their employment carrier also. For example, in 1998 Uk leaders of edu...
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Line 3, column 396, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'decided'.
Suggestion: decided
...to apply in course which government has decide for them according to their marks in pr...
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Line 3, column 613, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...Governments design can also turn around students life. On the other hand, some people a...
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Line 4, column 138, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
... they love to study, because it will be more easier for them to learn and to understand pro...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 407, Rule ID: NEWS_PAPER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'newspaper'? This word sequence is usually spelled together.
Suggestion: newspaper
...chieve their goals. For example, recent news paper was showing that in 2016-17 Indian has ...
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Line 4, column 532, Rule ID: APOSTROPHE_PLURAL[1]
Message: Consider using the plural form here: 'guardians'.
Suggestion: guardians
...students of university students because guardian’s was forcing them to study in engineerin...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, well, as for, for example, as well as, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1576.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86419753086 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32913267449 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496913580247 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 116.123758434 49.4020404114 235% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 143.272727273 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.4545454545 20.7667163134 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3636363636 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.365019129193 0.244688304435 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146159273309 0.084324248473 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0886922189143 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.250456711187 0.151304729494 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0812733202328 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.5 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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