The Salton Sea in California is actually a salty inland lake. The level of salt in the lake's water—what scientists call its salinity—has been increasing steadily for years because the lake's water is evaporating faster than it is being replaced by rainfall or rivers. If the trend continues, the lake's water will soon become so salty that the lake will be unable to support fish and bird populations. The lake would then become essentially a dead zone. Fortunately, there are several ways to reverse the trend that is threatening the lake's health.One option is direct removal of salt from the lake's water in special desalination facilities. Water from the lake would be pumped into the facilities and heated. This would cause the water to evaporate into steam, while salt and other materials dissolved in the water would be left behind. The steam would then be cooled down and returned to the lake as salt-free water. Gradually, the high salt levels would be reduced and the lake’s overall health would be restored.Another possible solution is to dilute the salt level in the lake with water from the ocean. Since water in the Pacific Ocean is 20 percent less salty than water in the lake, bringing ocean water into the lake would decrease the lake’s salinity. The ocean water could be delivered through pipelines or canals.Yet another solution would be to control the lake's salinity by constructing walls to divide the lake into several sections. In the smaller sections, salinity would be allowed to increase. However, in the main and largest section, salinity would be reduced and controlled by, among other things, directing all the freshwater from small rivers in the area to flow into that main section of the lake.
The reading and lecture are both about the solution for the continuous increase of salt in the Saltan Sea. The author of the article presented three solutions for to decrease the salt level and reduce the risk of Saltan Sea lack to become dead Zone. The lecturer disagrees with the solution provided by the author. His position is that author's ideas contains several disadvantages.
According to the reading text, lake water should be transfer from lake to desalination facility. In the facility the salty water being heated and this will evaporate the water and redundant material can be dissolved. The steam than cooled down and release that water again in lake. This solution is challenged by the lecturer. He clims that desalination process lead to some major health risk. The redundant material after the water evaporation often contains salenium with the salt. If that salenium released in the air than it could result in some dangerous health issues.
Secondly the author suggest the idea of diluting the salt level in the Saltan Sea. He suggest to bring water from the less salty nearest sea to the lack and that will eventually dilute the lack's salty level. The lecturer disagrees with this idea. The lecturer says that to build a pipeline from sea to the lack is very expensive. However he also says that the nearest sea-shore is 100 kilometres away from the lack. So building a pipeline for that long distance to bring sea water to lack is very costly and financially not feasible.
Finally the author posits that construct walls in the lake and make section. Smaller section will have the increasing salty level while larger or main section will have the incoming water from nearest rivers. This will eventually dilute the larger section's salt level. In contrast, the lecturer stance is that building walls can be a short term solution but can not be long term solution. Additionally he says that in the Saltan Sea lake there are frequent earthquakes. So any large scale earthquake will destroy the walls and water from smaller section are will mix with the larger section area.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 251, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...of Saltan Sea lack to become dead Zone. The lecturer disagrees with the solution pr...
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Line 3, column 53, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'transferred'?
Suggestion: transferred
... the reading text, lake water should be transfer from lake to desalination facility. In ...
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Line 3, column 485, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... often contains salenium with the salt. If that salenium released in the air than ...
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Line 5, column 87, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggest bringing'.
Suggestion: suggest bringing
...ng the salt level in the Saltan Sea. He suggest to bring water from the less salty nearest sea t...
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Line 5, column 87, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'He' must be used with a third-person verb: 'suggests'.
Suggestion: suggests
...ng the salt level in the Saltan Sea. He suggest to bring water from the less salty near...
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Line 5, column 331, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...from sea to the lack is very expensive. However he also says that the nearest sea-shore...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...costly and financially not feasible. Finally the author posits that construct walls ...
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Line 7, column 189, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'from the nearest'.
Suggestion: from the nearest
...in section will have the incoming water from nearest rivers. This will eventually dilute the...
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Line 7, column 390, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Additionally,
...tion but can not be long term solution. Additionally he says that in the Saltan Sea lake the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.4613686534 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 5.04856512141 238% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 7.30242825607 151% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 22.412803532 94% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 30.3222958057 129% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 5.01324503311 299% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1748.0 1373.03311258 127% => OK
No of words: 354.0 270.72406181 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93785310734 5.08290768461 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.04702891845 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4101591615 2.5805825403 93% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 145.348785872 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.463276836158 0.540411800872 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 537.3 419.366225166 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 13.0662251656 176% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 21.2450331126 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.1871949369 49.2860985944 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.0 110.228320801 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3913043478 21.698381199 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.17391304348 7.06452816374 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 4.19205298013 215% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 4.45695364238 224% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.27373068433 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258520363739 0.272083759551 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0790890261139 0.0996497079465 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0692883049689 0.0662205650399 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156144967739 0.162205337803 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0696355134155 0.0443174109184 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.3589403974 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 53.8541721854 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.0289183223 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.2367328918 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.42419426049 93% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 63.6247240618 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.498013245 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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