The chart shows British Emigration to selected destinations between 2004 and 2007

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The chart shows British Emigration to selected destinations between 2004 and 2007.

The supplied bar chart provide a comparison of the preferred destination of the British when they emigrate from 2004 to 2007.

Overall, it is obvious that Australia always hosted the highest rank over during 4 years. while France witnessed the reverse pattern The people' tendency for emigrating Australia, USA, France over 4-year-period varied substantially. However, Spain and New Zealand experienced a downward trend from 2004 to 2007.

According to the detail in the given chart, Australia came as the most preffered in 2004, with the recorded figure was more than 40 thousands people and higher than nearly 2 times when compared with New Zealand, USA, France at the same year. Nevertheless, the number fluctuated countries as Australia, USA witnessed the decrease in 2005 while British emigrants to France reached peak at this year. In 2206, Australia upsurged to the peak number than ever before which was accounted for highest number in the given charts.

Turning to the two remaining nations, the data of emigrants in Spain met at the same record in 2004 and 2005. Subsequently, the supplied data in New Zealand had the same pattern like Span. Finally, the number of British emigrants in Span and New Zealand decreased over the 2 last years which was under 30 and exactly 20 thousands people respectively.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 91, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: While
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, nevertheless, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1107.0 965.302439024 115% => OK
No of words: 215.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1488372093 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69550835252 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562790697674 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 315.9 283.868780488 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.510213932 43.030603864 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.7 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1 5.23603664747 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191975246361 0.215688989381 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0863992511022 0.103423049105 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104010689266 0.0843802449381 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159397406243 0.15604864568 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123131531956 0.0819641961636 150% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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