International travel has many advantages to both travelers and the country
that they visited. Do Advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Crossing the borders and travelling other countries has become a common phenomenon. Some believes that travelling abroad has a lot of advantages not only to the traveller himself but also it benefits the country they visit. This essay shall discuss both sides of the argument.
Now a days, people travel other countries frequently. Firstly, Travelling to another country costs a lot of money, which directly affect the countries economy they visit. For instance, the economy of Maldives mostly depends on tourism, without which their economy will collapse. Secondly, another plus point of going to another country is that one can familiarise with the culture and tradition of that region, which
directly impact the society and family when they come back, additionally they can transfer the own culture as well. For example, some universities arrange this type of cross border visit to gather knowledge on different region.
On the other hand, there are two major disadvantages of international travelling. Firstly, as it has become easier to travel around the world, with time illegal immigration has also increased. A study by UN has found that almost five percent of traveller from developing countries do not come back to their country. Secondly, frequent travelling increase the cost of people. Just to enjoy the free time people
travel another country without keeping in mind about their real income.
In conclusion, though international travelling has a great positive impact on economy, it has some negative impacts too on society. However, the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1356.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.424 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76624221644 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.1324739862 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.4 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46666666667 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.412138052136 0.244688304435 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130613812196 0.084324248473 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0930485810863 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192508788827 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0922684140237 0.056905535591 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.86 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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