Some people say that individuals who make a lot of money are the most successful. Others think that those who contribute to society like scientists and teachers are more successful. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
In the modern world there are various definitions of success for the different people. some parts of a society thinks that people who are prosperous by money they are more successful, while others believe that people who have profession such as teacher and scientist are more successful. The essay will discuss both the sides in brief, and I will give my perspective .
The rich personalities such as businessmen mans, celebrities are paying huge amount of tax, which can be useful by the government to assist underprivileged citizens. Additionally, big personalities donates significant money for the poor people they are living their life with full of joy, but they are also making others life full of shine. For Example, an eminent person donates a certain amount of money because of this more and more people join them. Secondly, people who are are prosperous they have done something extraordinary compared to other people that is the reason they are more overachiever in the life. Consequently, they are successful in their life and playing great role to make numerous people happy.
On the other hand, someone who is building young minds, and serving to the nation are also victorious in their life. They do not provided high remuneration, although they play imperative role in young minds. In other words, this new generation is going to serve their service to the country which is most possible without great teacher. For instance, if the base of the nation is powerful and mature that country will definitely be grow more. Also, in a survey it is found that if literacy rate is over 70% those nations are economically stronger. Furthermore, scientists and creative people makes our life convenient, and effortless by developing plethora of inventions.
In my opinion, no matter how rich anyone is, the paramount thing is how someone is using that money to develop their country, their people, education system. Eventually, that is a success.
In conclusion, rich people serves nation by taxes and donations, while people who are having less salary but build young generation are also important and successful. Undoubtedly, both are inevitable for growth of nation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, in brief, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 13.1623246493 220% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1833.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16338028169 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81027358257 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554929577465 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 577.8 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3746597809 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.833333333 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7222222222 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279735390397 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0849391037231 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.071415274959 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159046833963 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106245482186 0.056905535591 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.