You are going to take a vacation soon and want your friend to go with you. Write a letter to your friend asking him/her to come with you. In your letter, you should:
-Tell him/her why you want the holiday/vacation
-Describe your plan
-Invite him/her to go with you.
Dear Sahil,
Hope you are doing well by the grace of Almighty. Anyway, I'm writing today to inform you that I'm planning a vacation on coming weekend to the Hills, and I would like you to come and join me for a small weekend holiday.
As you know, the coming weekend is a Holi which is a color of festivals celebrated in our country. I thought, it would be best to celebrate the festival in the hilly areas of Rishikesh while camping along with colors and good music. Besides, I didn't took any of the vacation together this year, so, I thought it would be great time to go out of town and get my mind relaxed and stress free from work.
Let me explain you the holiday plan briefly. We will be going by car on Friday afternoon around 2PM to Rishikesh. Our first stop will be Haridwar where we will spent the entire evening near the river Ganga and enjoy the local tradition and customs of the small town Haridwar. On Saturday morning around 11, we will directly go to our destination and will be staying near Shiva Valley in Rishikesh where I'll be making the bookings according to the requirement, if you and your wife will be coming to this trip. We will spent entire weekend with lots of activities like bonfire, camping, music, dancing, playing Holi on Saturday, and mountain climbing. Finally, on Monday morning we will be back to our homes after this exciting and well-planned holiday.
I would like you to come along with me, and you could also take your wife as I'll be taking my girlfriend too. This small holiday is totally of worth spending on the occasion of Holi.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Regards,
Shain
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 59, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
... well by the grace of Almighty. Anyway, Im writing today to inform you that Im pla...
^^
Line 3, column 95, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...ay, Im writing today to inform you that Im planning a vacation on coming weekend t...
^^
Line 5, column 245, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
... with colors and good music. Besides, I didnt took any of the vacation together this ...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 161, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'spend'
Suggestion: spend
...rst stop will be Haridwar where we will spent the entire evening near the river Ganga...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 404, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...ng near Shiva Valley in Rishikesh where Ill be making the bookings according to the...
^^^
Line 7, column 519, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'spend'
Suggestion: spend
...fe will be coming to this trip. We will spent entire weekend with lots of activities ...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 78, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...e, and you could also take your wife as Ill be taking my girlfriend too. This small...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, besides, briefly, finally, first, if, look, so, well, while, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 4.92783505155 264% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 26.3917525773 174% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1354.0 937.175257732 144% => OK
No of words: 297.0 206.0 144% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55892255892 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 3.78020617076 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32828221964 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 127.690721649 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558922558923 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 403.2 290.88556701 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.3745588218 44.8134815571 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.7142857143 76.5299724578 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2142857143 16.8248392259 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92857142857 4.34317383033 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236152021991 0.216113520407 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0857550626821 0.0766984524023 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0747384661342 0.0603063233224 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159656252248 0.12726935374 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0556682156344 0.0580467560999 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.