The spread of multinational companies and the increase of globalisation produces positive effects for everyone.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In contemporary society, it is generally believed that the expansion of international firms as well as the fact that globalisation has been spreading to a great number of nations have brought certain beneficial influences to individuals. From my personal perspective, I totally concur with this statement.
Several advantages can be considered when multinational firms start to operate in a nation. First, individuals will be provided with numerous employment opportunities. Since human resources play an incredibly crucial role in every organisation, it is important for businesses to recruit new staff members once they start up in a new market. In addition to this, multinational companies moving to a developing area will also bring expertise as well as skilful workforce for training purposes. Hence, this is a golden chance for local people in developing countries to widen their knowledge as well as to sharpen their craftsmanship.
Apart from the abovementioned practical concerns, it is also worth pointing out that when a country is globalised, its citizens will be benefited in various aspects. First, globalisation will increase competitiveness in a market, between domestic and foreign companies. Therefore, in order to stay in business, enterprises are required to assure that their products come with the best quality, which means that consumers are able to purchase high-quality goods. Another upside of globalisation to individual is the opportunity to access new culture. As an international firm starts their business in a totally new environment, it will also bring external culture to the host countries. Thus, employees will have a chance to enrich their cultural knowledge by exchanging culture with international workers.
Taking everything into consideration, this reinforces my perspective that people are certainly benefited by the growth of multinational firms as well as globalisation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 576, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'start'?
Suggestion: start
...s new culture. As an international firm starts their business in a totally new environ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, so, therefore, thus, well, apart from, as to, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1632.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.66666666667 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.39446262952 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604166666667 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9143814163 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.571428571 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5714285714 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35714285714 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0850652469662 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0301833652641 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0326571919251 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0499093280419 0.151304729494 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.019797114511 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.61 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.0 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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