Some people think that the main factors influencing a child’s development these days are things such as television, friends and music. Others believe that the family still remains more important. Discuss about opinions and give your give your opinion.
Over the past decades, the issues centering on child’s growth has triggered a heated debate and it has been discussed by many people. It has been believed by some individuals that social factors have effects on child’s growth, while others opine that family holds greater power to affect a child's behavior in the development stages. Both views will be followed by a reasoned conclusion.
On the one hand, there are many reasons why there are factors external to the family that significantly impact on a child's development. Firstly, news reports shown on a television keep children updating with the latest information around the world. This could help them see things that will teach them about life. Secondly, another factor that exercises a great influence on a child's development is friend. Apart from television and the internet, children spend plenty of time with their friends and like listening to music. Friend also has an important influence as a child will often copy peers that they admire and respect. This could be a positive behavior but it could also be negative, such as smoking or text or taking drugs. Therefore, the rapid expansion of technology and cultural changes have significantly impacted the way in which a child will develop.
On the other hand, it is also understandable as to why family exerts the greatest influence on children. To begin with, parents and siblings used to be the first and fore most influence. Children are taught etiquette, code of ethics by parents at a very young age. Therefore, they might behave properly when communicating with others. Another reason is that children spend a huge amount of time being with parents at home and is easy for them to follow the way how problem are solved by their parents.
In conclusion, the mentioned suggest indicated that each view has the own its reasons. Although it is clear that factors such as music or friends have great effect on children, i believe that parents’ impacts seem to outweigh because they always stand by their children; hence, they will help them to take best advantages from social factors.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, then, while, for example, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1348.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88405797101 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55304982953 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7780006361 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.8666666667 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.73333333333 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168833776378 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0499760860277 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442609223575 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0996775885333 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.048999663978 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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