People who live in large cities face a range of problems in their daily life.
What are the main problems people in cities face, and how can these problems be tackled?
There are many problems for people choosing to spend their life in urban city. But, the main problem happening in daily life are time and social life. However, it could be tackled by going to vacation or spend a quality weekend with family and holding a small meeting with community.
In big cities, people using their time from dawn until dusk to work in office, because they have a tendency to have a small house in sub-urban area which is the price still reasonable. It’s mean that they must to waste their existence in office or nearby almost half a day. For example, in Jakarta, the capital city of Indonesia, workers usually go to workplaces at 4 o’clock in the morning and return to the home at 9 o’clock in the evening.
In addition, living in big cities produces a problem with social life. The same reason with previous paragraph, people often to expend their daily time in office, whereas they have no time to gather with their neighborhood. This phenomenon could impact in society, because they would not know living besides their house. But, those problem could be handled by allocating the weekend time with people whom we love or gathering with our surrounding people in the evening such as security patrol, the action that very popular in rural area to keep the area save and comfort.
In conclusion, the routine activities in urban area could impact in time and social life. However, it could be manipulated by gathering with people whom we love and people living nearby to reduce social life problems. Where possible, the government should enact the law to limit work hours in office or factory, therefore the situation could create the balance of life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 206, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
...e still reasonable. It’s mean that they must to waste their existence in office or near...
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Line 5, column 327, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this problem' or 'those problems'?
Suggestion: this problem; those problems
...t know living besides their house. But, those problem could be handled by allocating the week...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, so, still, therefore, whereas, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1400.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84429065744 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38576735517 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536332179931 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2757944901 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.692307692 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2307692308 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.15384615385 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256921100542 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105342596225 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0856525014227 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164625165089 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0769572203122 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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