It is said that the amount of violence in the TV programs has negative effects on social development and therefore should be reduced. To what extent you agree and disagree.
In this day and age tv programes display the amount of violence which is considered to have some negative impacts on the children as well as the adults. As a results, these images need to be cut off . To my mind i agree with this statement. this essay will help us gain-in depth knowledge about this issue
The first factor need to be considered is the imitation of the children. children to to be curious and want to explore everything around them. violence will make them have a thought of doing bad behaviour which is very risky. we can illustrate the fact that many parents neglect their children and usually let them watch tv program with including many malicious content. Other factor need to be considered is that violence will create awful environment. The more violence it has, the more pessimistic observers fell. viewing the violent scence happening in tv program will have considerable impact on mental health's developments. For instance, many people experienced felling shocked as welll as anxiety when they view thriller scence. Finally, violence will make society tend to be complicated. violence will increase the rate of offenders. many scences in the film provide viewers the way to commit the crime as well as the way of getting away with murders. For example, in many crime cases, the criminals come clean that they imitate the the violence of the action in programes. In conclusion, it's high time we had to reduce these violence in oder to help society develope day by day
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1241.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86666666667 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59339405973 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58431372549 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 387.0 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.7140881691 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.5625 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9375 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6875 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17255999142 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0563193978167 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0393874136682 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135502099911 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00348624864876 0.056905535591 6% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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