Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Playing computer games is a waste of time. Children should not be allowed to play them. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In this modern world everything is getting computerized and new generation is more attracted towards this technology. Some people are inclined towards the attitude that children should play the games on computer so they will be at home in their spare time, whereas, others hold different perspective. No one can deny that there are both positive and negative aspects of playing games on the monitor. I personally, though, believe that such games are a waste of time and just an addiction. In the following essay, I intend to put forth my points and reasons for support.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that this advancement in internet is making the youth more addictive and children do not realize that they are wasting time and their youth. In the growing age children should focus on their health by playing different sports to keep the body active. To exemplify, my cousin was accustomed to play video games on laptop all the time and his parents do not say anything. Now he is only twenty two years old and suffering from heart and muscles issues because without physical activity his muscles get flabby. As a result, doctors recommended him to do walk and running. Therefore, this example illustrates that video games are waste of time.
Secondly, computer game is good if it is played within time limit. Long time of watching screen may effect the eye sight. It is responsibility of parents to control their children and help to spend more time in studies instead of useless games. To explain broadly, with time there are more negative impact of this technology on an individual. I have to admit that my opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my own personal experience. When I was in school my best friend had computer in her house which really inspired me a lot. I asked my parents to buy me one they reject and explained me it is not good. Moreover, whenever I went to my friends I played with her but my best friend always playing. As a result, she loose her eye sight a lot and now she avoid such games.
In the light of the reasons mentioned above, I strongly believe that parents should take care of their child and save them by wasting their time and health.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 324, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[4]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'accustomed to playing'.
Suggestion: accustomed to playing
...ody active. To exemplify, my cousin was accustomed to play video games on laptop all the time and ...
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Line 2, column 430, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: twenty-two
...nts do not say anything. Now he is only twenty two years old and suffering from heart and ...
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Line 3, column 100, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[6]
Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
...limit. Long time of watching screen may effect the eye sight. It is responsibility of ...
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Line 3, column 111, Rule ID: EYE_BROW[1]
Message: This word is usually spelt together: 'eyesight'.
Suggestion: eyesight
... time of watching screen may effect the eye sight. It is responsibility of parents to con...
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Line 3, column 452, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...fluenced by my own personal experience. When I was in school my best friend had comp...
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Line 3, column 734, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
...friend always playing. As a result, she loose her eye sight a lot and now she avoid s...
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Line 3, column 744, Rule ID: EYE_BROW[1]
Message: This word is usually spelt together: 'eyesight'.
Suggestion: eyesight
...ays playing. As a result, she loose her eye sight a lot and now she avoid such games. In...
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Line 3, column 772, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'avoids'.
Suggestion: avoids
...e loose her eye sight a lot and now she avoid such games. In the light of the reason...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, whereas, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1820.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 389.0 407.700716846 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67866323907 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51825434231 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557840616967 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 568.8 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.9045092829 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.6666666667 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5238095238 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.38095238095 5.45110844103 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274985773783 0.236089414692 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0793419355776 0.076458572812 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0639862392975 0.0737576698707 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16904509503 0.150856017488 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0524741416809 0.0645574589148 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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