Technology, while apparently aimed to simplify our lives, only make our lives more complicated.
technology is now an integral part of our life. Not a day goes by, we pass without using any sort of technology in our day to day life. new inventions intend to make our life more simple. while the addition of so many technical products in our life may seem more complicated initially, it is not necessarily feel like that after some time.
The process of learning how to use new technology might be daunting to many. Since technology is progressing very fast, it is hard to cope up with the pace. but the usage of these make tasks possible from being impossible. For example, communication between two far places were very difficult, unreliable and time consuming previously. The technology has now made it very easier for people to communicate between two corners of the world within a few seconds. Telephone, fax and now Internet have made wordwide communication possible. Did the addition of so many new technologies in communication sector made our life difficult? No. it might seem puzzling for someone initially but it has made everything easier, cheaper and extremely fast. Same goes for travelling. now with the invention of cars, ships, planes, people can easily travel to any corner of the world. Trade exchange is now very easy with the help of cargo ships, trains etc. Calculation that took humans several days to solve previously can be done in the blink of eyes with the help of computer. All of these simplified our lives to a great extent.
Though all good come with some bad obviously. As technology is spreading very fast, it is tough to keep it track and monitor it. it gave rise to new forms of crime which are harder to identify. Addiction to mobile phones, different social media platforms have made human antisocial, depressed and suicidal in extreme cases. people are easily deceived, conned via these platforms. Radiations from mobile phones and other electronic devices have given to rise to new diseases.
Therefore, while technology simplifies our lives to a great extent, misuse, uncontrolled & unmonitored use of it make our life complicated to some extent.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Technology
technology is now an integral part of our life. No...
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Line 1, column 83, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...life. Not a day goes by, we pass without using any sort of technology in our day ...
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Suggestion: New
...t of technology in our day to day life. new inventions intend to make our life more...
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Suggestion: While
...ns intend to make our life more simple. while the addition of so many technical produ...
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Suggestion: But
...t, it is hard to cope up with the pace. but the usage of these make tasks possible ...
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Suggestion: Now
...tremely fast. Same goes for travelling. now with the invention of cars, ships, plan...
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Line 3, column 941, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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Suggestion:
...ith the help of cargo ships, trains etc. Calculation that took humans several day...
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Message: “Though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...plified our lives to a great extent. Though all good come with some bad obviously. ...
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Line 5, column 108, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
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Suggestion: tracks
...ading very fast, it is tough to keep it track and monitor it. it gave rise to new for...
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Suggestion: People
...epressed and suicidal in extreme cases. people are easily deceived, conned via these p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, second, so, therefore, while, for example, sort of, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1745.0 2235.4752809 78% => OK
No of words: 352.0 442.535393258 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95738636364 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75593572647 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 215.323595506 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571022727273 0.4932671777 116% => OK
syllable_count: 567.9 704.065955056 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 23.0359550562 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.2584314707 60.3974514979 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 72.7083333333 118.986275619 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6666666667 23.4991977007 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.45833333333 5.21951772744 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257569177798 0.243740707755 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0696898297732 0.0831039109588 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107559298865 0.0758088955206 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200343254415 0.150359130593 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.150917097573 0.0667264976115 226% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 14.1392134831 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 48.8420337079 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 12.1743820225 72% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 12.1639044944 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 100.480337079 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 11.2143820225 68% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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