It is cruel to keep animals inside zoos instead of letting them roam freely in their own habitats.
It is evident that being kept imprisoned in zoos causes an adverse impact on animals since this reduces their freedom and causes them both physical and mental health issues. To begin with, wildlife’s freedom is being threatened in zoos. While all the animals can roam freely in their own habitat, humans capture them and keep them in a small piece of land enclosed with high walls for years until they become too old to provide entertainment for humans. An artificial environment might ensure all the living conditions for animals; however, it is no better than a natural habitat where animals have their freedom. Furthermore, being kept in the zoo for a long time potentially cause many considerable impacts on animals’ health. They either suffer from pain, injuries, and trauma or even commit suicide because of being kept in cages. In many zoos, animals receive insufficient legal protection from the government, so they are abused and starved. Precisely, the World Association of Zoos and Aquariums estimated that 75 per cent of them have encountered violence. In summary, animals must be set free instead of being kept in zoos; therefore, they can have freedom and live happily in their natural environment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 92, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...uses an adverse impact on animals since this reduces their freedom and causes them b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, while, in summary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1018.0 1615.20841683 63% => OK
No of words: 199.0 315.596192385 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11557788945 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66405602706 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.668341708543 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 315.0 506.74238477 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0470048551 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.111111111 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1111111111 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.11111111111 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250605754307 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0899670055132 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0777441216257 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.250605754307 0.151304729494 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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