Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
Environmental issues have been alarming problems for human for quite a long time now and have aroused heated controversy about what the most serious matter is at the moment. While several people state that the major problem is the extinction of some specific kinds of flora and fauna, I believe that there are other noteworthy issues.
On the one hand, the loss of some certain types of botany and animals may result in a lack in food chain. Every plant and animal are a part of the food, and if some chains are missing, other animals that live on that species may die out as their nourishment source is no longer available. This happens in chains and as human being at the top of the food chain, eventually the food supply for human will be in shortage.
On the other hand, there are more critical matters of the environment, and one of them is climate change. The extinction of animals and food supply may take time, but the effect of climate change, especially global warming is visible to mankind. The average temperature on Earth has increased by 1 degree Celcius since 1900, causing hotter weather and even draught in several regions. Human bodies best function at a temperature of 25 degrees Celcius, and 38 degree is the level where it starts to be harmful. Moreover, a warmer atmosphere can hold more moisture, resulting in intense downpours and more floods, which is the culprit of crops damage and death-toll.
In conclusion, it is undoubted that missing plants and animals has a great impact on human life, I argue that climate change is one of even more severe environmental problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, moreover, so, while, in conclusion, in short, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1325.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76618705036 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51744341542 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586330935252 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 25.8140201511 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 120.454545455 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2727272727 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183131059846 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0685947699092 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.050430186009 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110035646133 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0269275550846 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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