It is neither possible nor useful for a country to provide university places for a high proportion of young people. Agree or disagree?
Sentiments diverge on whether the government should not access higher education to be offered to younger people. Although some formidably censure this stance, I advocate it due to some rational reasons.
Admittedly, the first reason is that for some students instead of going to university, young people can go to vocational schools with short training courses to save time and especially money, moreover giving them the opportunity to access work and have work experience. Other than that, multiple people are unable to acquire and apply knowledge. The reason ís that if they do not have the ability to meet strict demands and have the academic skills to complete academic tasks such as assignments or tuition, they can drop out of school or be suspended, which leads to a waste of their and the government's time and money on futile efforts.
Further and even more prominently, the reason why access to higher education is not necessarily for young people. For some jobs, especially blue-collar jobs, a 4-year degree and training program in universities is not a requirement sought by most employers as most jobs only require experience, not theory.Therefore, it is not necessary to build schools for students, but only teachers to train students, increase more human resources for the country to develop.
To sum up, it is very unnecessary to provide access to higher education on a large scale.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 593, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'governments'' or 'government's'?
Suggestion: governments'; government's
...which leads to a waste of their and the governments time and money on futile efforts. Furt...
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Line 3, column 306, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Therefore
...obs only require experience, not theory.Therefore, it is not necessary to build schools f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, so, therefore, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1173.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 229.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12227074236 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85905171234 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615720524017 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 368.1 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 103.244854593 49.4020404114 209% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 146.625 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.625 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.375 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144621439781 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0532790566149 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523997198835 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0704455687712 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0654863221576 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.01 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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