People live longer today and so people should stay in the workforce longer To what extent do you agree or disagree

Grammar and spelling errors:
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nowadays, the average life expectancy is growing...
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..., the average life expectancy is growing , so it is believed that the retirement a...
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...hat the retirement age should be raised.In my opinion , this is not reasonable sug...
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...ement age should be raised.In my opinion , this is not reasonable suggestion gener...
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...reasonable suggestion generally, however , the government take advantage of people...
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...ribution to benefits national prosperity , and secondly express disadvantage. the...
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...y , and secondly express disadvantage. the principal reason of the government to r...
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... longer is that it increases tax revenue ,so it is the key to success in terms of ...
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...uccess in terms of social felicity, also , everyone will be able to accept tasks a...
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...o accept tasks as a full-fledged manager , as a result ,they do not need to any mo...
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... as a full-fledged manager , as a result ,they do not need to any more new workfor...
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...ey do not need to any more new workforce , so it is a mean of save spending times ...
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...mean of save spending times and costs. on the other hand , the workforce longer h...
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...ding times and costs. on the other hand , the workforce longer has a lot of drawb...
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...e longer has a lot of drawbacks for them ,such as , every one of them that is in m...
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...has a lot of drawbacks for them ,such as , every one of them that is in middle age...
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...ample energetic for own daily activities , therefore , some of them will be frail ...
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...tic for own daily activities , therefore , some of them will be frail . also in th...
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..., therefore , some of them will be frail . also in the range of the age everyone s...
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...herefore , some of them will be frail . also in the range of the age everyone should...
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...the range of the age everyone should be have fun times and goes on different trips t...
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... for rest and relaxation. In conclusion , I am convinced that raising the retirem...
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...that aims to ensure financial prosperity , but what ought to be priority in long t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, i think, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1087.0 1615.20841683 67% => OK
No of words: 224.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85267857143 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95418790611 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 352.8 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 20.2975951904 182% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 109.726047753 49.4020404114 222% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 181.166666667 106.682146367 170% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.3333333333 20.7667163134 180% => OK
Discourse Markers: 25.1666666667 7.06120827912 356% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.01903807615 458% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134087613736 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.052159486793 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04004056455 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0710688545182 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355796573228 0.056905535591 63% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.1 13.0946893788 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.92 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 11.3001002004 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 9.78957915832 312% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.1190380762 166% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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