Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People are never satisfied with what they have; they always want something more or something different. Use specific reasons to support your answer.
Considering people’s satisfaction, I strongly believe that most people are rarely satisfied with what they have. On the one hand The tendency to want more of something is undeniable. on the other hand, I am inclined to take the opposite direction of the statement that people always try to have something different. Although, the tendency variation is one of the acceptable characteristics of human psychological aspect, it turns into the way to provide better options for people. It is hard to believe that people always want something different even if they are to encounter some difficulties. Anyway, to elaborate more on the topic just mentioned, the following reasons and examples will be presented to clarify the subject.
First and foremost, regarding the psychological dimension of human beings, from their birth to their death, the tendency to upgrade in different parts of life can be recognized as the main reason that people always want something more. As the social findings reveal, in all famous civilizations, the desirability to upgrade life conditions is/has been the main motivation for development. People always want more wealth, knowledge and solace. Even in their individual lives, parents register /enroll their children in schools to gain more knowledge and be familiar with life conditions in modern societies. They are never satisfied with the current level of knowledge of their children. In addition, their endeavor to establish much better financial situations/ status or in other words to be displeased with their current economy can be mentioned as another example of human’s / humantendency to want something more. Beyond that, the assault of powerful countries on feeble countries to exploit their sources can also be indicated when it comes to getting something more. It is also worth noting that people or even societies develop in a way to have something better not necessarily different. Although, human curiosity pushes them to experience avariety of viewpoints, their effort can only be described to find better ways for having something much better. As a result, the tendency to have something more is one of the psychological aspects .
Another primary reason can be ascribed to the tendency of competition among people. Being one of the most proliferated subjects in all categories/ classes / levels of a society, the driving force to want something more, in spite of having sufficient stocks, is competition. As the antediluvian religious stories have pointed out, this characteristic is recognized as a one of the hostility reasons / hostile reasons among human ancestors. It is unquestionably accepted that the competition during people’s education plays a key role to help them achieve success. Students are not satisfied with their grades and make lots of effort to develop themselves and approach / keep up with high-grade students. This can be interpreted as one of the main advantages of the / such a competition. on the other hand, in a couple life, competition can be implied as one of the main reasons for their challenges. having positive or negative consequences, competition is the main catalyst in order for people not to be satisfied with what they have.
To recapitulate, the tendency of people that/,whom are not satisfied with what they have, can be attributed to the tendency for upgrading and competition. Regarding these factors, people always want to go through something different that / which may bring about much better conditions. In my opinion, these factors can be indicated as the development factors when it comes to ethical principles. Otherwise, people should be satisfied with what they have.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, but, first, if, may, regarding, so, even so, in addition, as a result, in my opinion, in other words, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 31.0 13.1623246493 236% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 92.0 41.998997996 219% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3099.0 1615.20841683 192% => OK
No of words: 580.0 315.596192385 184% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34310344828 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.90746259869 4.20363070211 117% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02394462026 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 261.0 176.041082164 148% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.45 0.561755894193 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 970.2 506.74238477 191% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 4.76152304609 315% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 16.0721442886 174% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9250367676 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.678571429 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7142857143 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.21428571429 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.343406794893 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116294919863 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0882753859511 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.260195964596 0.151304729494 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.060382734651 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 149.0 78.4519038076 190% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.