Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make many new friends easily.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Human beings are social animals we need social interactions to survive. During our time in the society we meet and befriend different people. I believe, the ability to maintain precious friendships is the most important factor for having a happy life. I will explore my reasonings in the following essay.
My main reason for my view on friendship is that, long time fiends are alot more helpful in times of need. A friend that has known you for long and stayed by your side through thick and thin is a lot more precious than one made easily. Of course this is not to say if a friendship is made easily it will break apart as easily, however, a companion that has been there for a long time may offer a significant amount of peace of mind. For example, during my highschool days when I was sick for a long time it was my friend of three year Parto that helped me catch up with the class. Coincidentally I had a friend that I had made during that year, but she barely offered to help. This situation makes me believe a long time friend can be of more assisstance in times of need. Knowing someone is there to help will lead to a lot less stress and make you happier.
Second, in long periods of time people will get to know each other better, trust each other, understand the complications each face and be helpful in facing them. Longtime friends understand you better. When your feeling down they may even understand you before their told of your problems and can console you better. A long time friend is someone that you know very well you know if they are trustworthy or not leading to more assurance when connecting with them.For example, my father is known amongst his friends as someone trustworthy on many occasions I have seen 30 year long friends of my father entrusting him with enormous amounts of money this shows that they trust him and can rely on him. This action can very well give them a sense of relief knowing theres somebody they can trust.
based on the above reasonings I believe that having a small circle of trustworthy and understanding friends and maintaining relationships with them will lead to a happiness and help you relax.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, incidentally, may, second, so, well, for example, of course, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1769.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 389.0 407.700716846 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54755784062 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49464636492 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511568123393 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.2216510507 48.9658058833 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.058823529 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8823529412 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.11764705882 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288740035817 0.236089414692 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0919914505149 0.076458572812 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062261359689 0.0737576698707 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173727960235 0.150856017488 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0315048826816 0.0645574589148 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.41 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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