when designing a building, the most important factor is intended use of the building rather than its outward appearance. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that when constructing a landmark, the use of that plays a vital role rather than its outside shape. I utterly concur with this view. While the purpose of building design is extremely crucial owing to restricting refurbishment, external design and architecture also play an equally important role and should be not overlooked.
To begin with, it has been widely demonstrated that an initial consideration to design a skyscraper is its goals. It is undoubted that without fulfilling its intended function, the investor will require the contractors taking responsibility of repairing and making it better, resulting in a waste of finance and time. A good example of this is the library of National Economic University in Hanoi. Initially, this building was utilized for a different purpose. If intended use of one was taken deliberately into account, limiting refurbishment later, giving rise to a waste of money.
On the other hand, it is obvious that the outer building and architecture should be not overlooked by the designer and investor. In reality, the extraordinarily special outline of landmark will attract huge of surrounding citizens. As a result, this brings benefits for investor and appeals city-dweller to make purchase apartment building. For instance, landmark 81 is the highest building in Viet Nam, gorgeous architecture, attracting many the wealthy and visitors, creating the beautiful image for country and also making good profit.
In conclusion, I completely agree the idea that the function of building is extremely crucial. Besides, external architecture plays an equally vital role. Therefore, when constructing a building have to meet all its needs and its functions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, look, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1447.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41947565543 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13434144345 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595505617978 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.143056478 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.4666666667 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46666666667 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226879495801 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0688983281127 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624153809766 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141743191704 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0523607719371 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.86 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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