International travel is becoming cheaper, and countries are opening their doors to more and more tourists. Do the advantages of increased tourism outweigh its disadvantages?
Opinions diverge on whether countries should opening their doors for international travel becoming cheaper. Although there seem some disadvantages, upsides overshadow in light of some rational reasons.
Admittedly, idea to wellcome all tourist to travel mutiple countries on the occasion of low excursion costs is one transparent disadvantage of social-disturbance. This can be explained by the fact that a large numbers of traveler visit any countries can lead to the uncontrollable behavior of human's behavior. For example, the government can not manage all the people thinking so the issues can occur drastically when they are doing illegal business or unlawful immigration, which lead the social and population chaos in once country.
Notwithstanding these aforementioned upside, developing the country’s economy can be seen under a positive light. The reason is the leap of the tourism industry with simultaneous to the flow of money increase throughout various services, perhaps of accommodation, transportation or entertainment. Hence, not just bring the benefits for the country, the citizens in that country have the opportunities to work to earn the income. Besides that, visistors can gain knowledge about the contry’s history and culture, experience numerous of sight and surging an ability of communication.
By way of conclusion, the advantages of both profits for the individual and country outweigh its disadvantages.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 163, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rent disadvantage of social-disturbance. This can be explained by the fact that a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, hence, so, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1235.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 214.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.77102803738 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.54926460529 2.80592935109 126% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.705607476636 0.561755894193 126% => OK
syllable_count: 378.9 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.6583647525 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.222222222 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7777777778 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.11111111111 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225231930222 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0842830658148 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102285383382 0.0667982634062 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133678755071 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.061167441031 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.48 12.4159519038 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.68 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 163, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rent disadvantage of social-disturbance. This can be explained by the fact that a...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, hence, so, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1235.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 214.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.77102803738 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.54926460529 2.80592935109 126% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.705607476636 0.561755894193 126% => OK
syllable_count: 378.9 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.6583647525 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.222222222 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7777777778 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.11111111111 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225231930222 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0842830658148 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102285383382 0.0667982634062 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133678755071 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.061167441031 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.48 12.4159519038 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.68 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.