More and more people decide to eat healthy food and exercise regularly. What are the reasons for this trend? What can be done to encourage more people to eat healthier and exercise?
these day, people tend to have a diet food and work out on a from numerous health problems. People more and more to eat healthy meals with their family do sports on a daily basis due to the fact that they wanna improve their health as well as keeping fit. In this essay, I would give many ways to encourage people have diet food and do work out frequently.
On the one hand, there are an abundance of reasons why people regularly have health food and work out. In the first place, during spread covid 19, people have experienced a lot of symptoms after having covid. therefore, people are likely to eat healthy food, like eat more vegetables and do sports, namely football or skateboarding, it offers them to enhance their healthy and maintain a healthy lifestyle. To take my self as a demonstration, 2 years ago, i often ate fast food, namly hamburger or sanwid and stayed at home to watch films and play video games however after i having covid 19, I took up changing my daily routine, In a day i usually eat a lots vegetables and in the evening, i will go for a walk with my mom, sometimes, i play football with my buddy in stadium.
On the other hand, there are many approaches to encourage citizens to have a diet food and do sports frequently. To begin with, the authorities are expected to encourage residents and raise their awareness about health.Furthermore, the government should equip with sports equiments for people to do exercise. To take my neighborhood as an example, the park near my house is equiped with a lot of physical equiment, which is convenient and it allows people could do work out in a daily routine. In addition, television station should be created programs how to become well-built, it is a motivation and innovation for people.
in conclusion, this trend is become popular and it brings numerous merits for citizens and i am still of the opinion that governments are expected to invest a huge amount of money equipping and raising the awareness’s residents.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, so, still, therefore, well, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, to begin with, in the first place, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1655.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70170454545 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77130499802 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528409090909 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.210235533 49.4020404114 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.916666667 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.3333333333 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.75 7.06120827912 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238592868554 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0931121680955 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0677570143886 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14006234918 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0707115764495 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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