Some people think that to be successful in sport, physical strength is the most important factor. Others, however, think that it is more important to be mentally strong. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
There is a range of physical and mental components that contribute to successful performance in sports. Some people believe that physical strength is a crucial element, however, others including me, are asserting that being mentally strong is more important to gain success.
Those who believe physical strength is the most important factor to be successful in sports consider this to have two main advantages. They claim that muscular endurance and body flexibility are two elements that play major roles in most of the sports. For instance, in sports like running players have to run non-stop at a defined time ship, and it puts loads of pressure on muscles. Other sport likes gymnastic needs to have an ultra-flexible body shape to cope with figures. However, I disapprove of this viewpoint as whole body worth nothing if do not have mental health.
Looking at the other side of the coin, other people, whose opinion I share, have a different viewpoint about being successful in sports. Mental health is crucial to control every aspect of body. As an example, body agility, which is the ability to quickly change body position or direction of the body, needs to support by true brain signals. Moreover, analytic and tactical ability is the ability of the mental system to evaluate and react to strategic situations, and it is not only important to be successful in sports, but also important for the rest of life.
In conclusion, although some believe that physical strength can lead to success in sport, I believe that mental health is much more necessary than strong muscles to gain victory in sport.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, moreover, so, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1347.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02611940299 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62231149915 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567164179104 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7891308888 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.25 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.91666666667 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332602918578 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120210177249 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113701099876 0.0667982634062 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220609374412 0.151304729494 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0781452064493 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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