Social and modern trends are difficult to follow these days and it’s widely believed that they primarily exist just to make the living more colorful, especially online. Some people believe that we shouldn’t follow them and that we should live in what we are having and feel comfortable.
To what extent do you agree with these statement?
Social medias are currently becoming a part of human daily life. People usually pick up their phone first when they get up at the morning; searching news or following trending and dramas. And from being an important part, social medias, specially social and modern trends have a huge effect. Although these are difficult to follow, they make the living more colorful thus people can have a normal day without it. While, the other one believe that they should not follow these trends. Thus this essay below will show my opinions about this issue somehow.
To begin with the first state of thinkings, they have their own reason to believe that social trends can impact to people thinking. It can bring many bad effects more than benefits for human living. In fact, there are a lot of trends that they are being shared widely in the Internet or social media. Most of them are ridiculous and do not have any meanings which are created to get more viewers and interactions. Unfortunately, most of bad trends are being followed by the teenager than the meaningful one and people are concerning about the future of the next generations. Besides, some of trends are re-using to much that can get boring and soon they are disappeared in social medias. Thus, living with own style can give people life colorful, creative and comfortable feeling.
To begin with the second state of thoughts, some trends are very meaningful that can give people more passions and efforts. Moreover, they usually share their life’s story or organize charity sessions for disadvantaged communities. However they always being skipped because of these contents are boring or difficult for teenager to follow.
In conclusion, I personally believe that most of social trends can make human living more colorful while the other trend can bring many bad effects to the teenager that can change their mind into the wrong ways. Thus, I totally suppose that living with own styles or follow trend selectively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...eople can have a normal day without it. While, the other one believe that they should...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...at they should not follow these trends. Thus this essay below will show my opinions ...
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Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...ager than the meaningful one and people are concerning about the future of the next generation...
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Line 3, column 585, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'some of', you should use 'the' ('some of the trends') or simply say ''some trends''.
Suggestion: some of the trends; some trends
...uture of the next generations. Besides, some of trends are re-using to much that can get borin...
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Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
...s. Besides, some of trends are re-using to much that can get boring and soon they ...
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Suggestion: However,
...sessions for disadvantaged communities. However they always being skipped because of th...
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Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put after the verb 'being'.
Suggestion: being always
...disadvantaged communities. However they always being skipped because of these contents are b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, however, if, moreover, second, so, thus, while, in conclusion, in fact, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1653.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99395770393 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38780043022 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516616314199 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.131850415 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.8333333333 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3888888889 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61111111111 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296259806586 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100245233258 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.07116654985 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198919250566 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0531161795614 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.