While people in developing countries are happier than in the past, people in developed countries are less happy. Why? What can be learnt from this?
people of developing countries are happier than they were while people in developed countries seem to witness the opposite phenomenon. I believe that there are two reasons leading to this, including the improvement of life in developing countries and problems that developed countries suffer from. From this phenomenon, numerous lessons can be learned. In this essay, I will discuss both reasons and the lessons.
people in developing countries have a better living standard than in the past. Because of industrialization and modern technologies, many developing countries have improved their economy. As a result, residents can make more money to improve their living standard. In contrast, people in rich countries are suffering from many problems. For instance, noise pollution from transport or air pollution from factories negatively affects people’s lives. another problem is the pressure they have to face. In Japan, the suicide rate remain extremely high due to stress. Therefore, people in developed countries cannot fulfill their sense of happiness.
What can be deduced from the above-mentioned reason is that money cannot be the most vital aspect in people’s lives and other problems such as environmental problems and social issues should be paid more attention. Firstly, environmental problems should be taken into account by the government in a more effective way. The government should impose restrictions to control emissions from factories to improve people’s well-being. another lesson is that people should find a way to achieve work-life balance such as playing sports or taking part in recreational activities to reduce stress.
In conclusion, people in developing countries are more satisfied with their lives than in the past compared to residents of developed countries due to economic growth in developing countries and issues happening in developed countries. I assert that people should find a suitable lifestyle while considering the environment and social problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1733.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.73841059603 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98961148845 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523178807947 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.0133233169 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2777777778 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7777777778 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11111111111 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.523902310332 0.244688304435 214% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.165163478312 0.084324248473 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.142880884425 0.0667982634062 214% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.350038155165 0.151304729494 231% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.131249391761 0.056905535591 231% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.72 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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