In the modern world, many employees lack soft skills such as communication and working in teams. What are the main causes of this problem? What are the effects of the lack of such skills? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In the current 4.0 technology era, a plenty of the country's human resources lack essential soft skills such as communication and teamwork. Social skills that are eclipsed by electric devices may be to blame. In the following paragraphs, I will analyze the causes of this situation worldwide. In the following paragraphs, I will analyze the causes of this situation worldwide.
First of all, when electronic devices along with popular social networking sites such as facebook, Instagram and online games with their own messaging tools have created new steps for people's lives, that made face-to-face communication absent. Humans depend on them more than spending time with friends or outdoor activities. Second, many parents are always busy with work and do not spend time playing or talking with their children is also a reason. Not only that, the education of the country also affects children quite a lot in their lifestyle and thinking, many schools only focus on teaching hard knowledge to children but do not support them to build basic soft skills such as communication. behavior, it has increasingly pushed this situation to become more common.
The consequences of the lack of soft skills leave a lot of consequences for those who do not possess it such as not building good relationships with colleagues, customers, poor work results when unable to agree, decide on all matters. The most common are the interviewers when applying for jobs, by not being open and difficult to communicate with strangers, causing themselves to lose points with the advisory board, which leads to them not being hired and becoming unemployed. To talk about the data of this situation, Vietnam can be an example with the unemployment rate of working age in 2022 is 3.22%, increasing to 0.54% compared to 2021. From not building If you build a relationship, it will form loneliness, which has a negative impact on mental health or worse is depression.
In summary, the proficient training of professional hard skills for employees is extremely necessary, but besides that, communication and behavior skills are also one of the things that need to be noted to help people become people. should be more confident when applying for jobs as well as building good relationships with colleagues and customers to help achieve higher work performance.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 700, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Behavior
...asic soft skills such as communication. behavior, it has increasingly pushed this situat...
^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 233, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Should
... be noted to help people become people. should be more confident when applying for job...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, may, second, so, well, in summary, such as, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1959.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 379.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16886543536 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88033367524 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564643799472 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 583.2 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.1338960585 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.6 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2666666667 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215252428426 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.071859513746 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508402476922 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134957521936 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0306403101792 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 700, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Behavior
...asic soft skills such as communication. behavior, it has increasingly pushed this situat...
^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 233, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Should
... be noted to help people become people. should be more confident when applying for job...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, may, second, so, well, in summary, such as, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1959.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 379.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16886543536 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88033367524 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564643799472 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 583.2 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.1338960585 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.6 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2666666667 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215252428426 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.071859513746 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508402476922 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134957521936 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0306403101792 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.