As people live longer and longer, the idea of cloning human beings in order to provide spare parts is becoming a reality. The idea horrifies most people, yet it is no longer mere science fiction.
To what extent do you agree with such a procedure?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.
Write at least 250 words.
Nowadays, science has reached a tremendous peak, which could not be thought of twenty years ago. With the desire of enhancing a longer life span, scientists are innovating human clones which has both pros and cons. There are some opinions that this is good and should be done, there are also some opinions that this should not be done for various reasons. I personally think that the practice of human cloning has its own benefits and drawbacks and I'm not on either side. And the essay below will explain more about my opinions.
Firstly, medical innovations are one of the most sort after researches in the world due to the increasing numbers of daily ailments that is befalling mankind. For many years, the medical fields have relied on generous donors who willingly tender their body organs such as kidneys and bone marrow, while some even donate their hearts upon demise. This action caused some people protest because although this is helping people, it is inhumane to people. Because of that, scientists have found a way to limit that, scientists have found a way to clone humans. Although currently in the world this method has not been successful and is banned by the government, but there are still some people who secretly research and implement it.
On the other hand, along with their benefits, there are also disadvantages that we do not anticipate. The first consequence of human cloning is the inability to control the gene pool. For example, after cloning yourself, you will receive an identical copy, which can be used for further cloning. The next consequence is to cause great costs for the country. For example, if each of us wants to be like this, it will cause extremely serious consequences leading to the depletion of money, affecting the future of the country. In my personal opinion, I am not completely leaning towards either side, each side has its own pros and cons.
In conclusion, human cloning brings many benefits and this will help people a lot in the future. and I hope this will soon be done to help people's lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, still, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1703.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82436260623 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43331398323 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56657223796 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6424045099 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.6111111111 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6111111111 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72222222222 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129792740425 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0417154403409 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0359617989458 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0839674452077 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0290071468072 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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