As people live longer and longer, the idea of cloning human beings in order to provide spare parts is becoming a reality. The idea horrifies most people, yet it is no longer mere science fiction.
To what extent do you agree with such a procedure?
A minority of individuals in the current contemporary society believe that the ideas of cloning in order to increase equality in work is becoming closer to the reality. Whereas others believe that this is horrible and should not be turned to reality. The further essay will discuss both sides and give the opinion to the issue above.
On the one hand, cloning technology can help citizens develop and modernize different industries in a country. For instance, in health industries, scientists and pharmacologists can use clones to replace human in dangerous experiments that have a substantial effect on individual’s life. Hence, human can minimize the amount of time for vaccine research and the amount of work in other experiments. Furthermore, clones being supplied for hospitality could be considered as one of the most important benefit due to the fact that they can be a suitable organs supply for patients. In fact without thinking about humanity, this is a plethora of breakthrough in the development of the world in particular and the medical industry in general.
On the other hand, although cloning technology brings several trinormous benefits for inhabitants, the amount of finance and time to create them are ginormous. Moreover, scientists and investors not only need to have experience, knowledge but also need a stable diligence and perserverance. In particularly, biologists and scientists need to have technologies that can copy and transfer the correct DNA and other body structures in human body. Thus, this actions required techniques and experience that majority of the scientists of the current world can not afford. Likewise, the world will lose a large amount of fortune and time fun for the others fields’ development.
In conclusion, from my perspective, i do not agree with this notion. Cloning technology is not suitable for human and can bring many issue for the world's health and budget. As a result, perform this futuristic researches with the current world knowledge level will influence the industrialization and modernization.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: organ
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Suggestion: these
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
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Suggestion: many issues
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'worlds'' or 'world's'?
Suggestion: worlds'; world's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, likewise, moreover, so, thus, whereas, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, in general, in particular, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1743.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33027522936 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09492209456 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532110091743 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 545.4 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5108678535 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.9375 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4375 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5625 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0870793440842 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0304812054591 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0329527829075 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0601794195271 0.151304729494 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.026372479926 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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