“Everybody should donate a fixed amount of their income to support charity”. How far do you share this viewpoint?
In this rapidly developing world, more and more people are inclined towards doing charity to support others. A section of society believes that we should impose a firm amount of an individual’s salary to embrace charity. I totally agree that we should volunteer to assist people living in underaverage conditions, yet with an amount of money according to a provider’s ability.
On the one hand, it has always been said that “sharing is caring”. More than two thirds of the globe’s citizens are struggling with conditions of lacking water, or deprivation of food, as well as others. We, as the remaining one third who are living (even slightly) better, should support the underprivileged people, which then may thrive and improve the society we are living in. Moreover, not only does volunteering help our country, or even our globe, but it also develops our life standards.
On the other hand, due to our own conditions, installing a certain sum on donors may be an impractical implementation. A majority of one third group aforementioned that may only live their average life and hardly have sufficient income to even provide themselves and their family, let alone spend such a restricted amount of money for charity. Besides, it may be true that donating a similarly specific amount may be more effortless to keep track of. However, charity is based on people’s kindness, so it should not be restricted by a total of money.
Overall, it is our goodwill to decide how much we spend to help those who are suffering from unfortunate situations, as goodness should not be restricted.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, may, moreover, similarly, so, then, third, well, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1341.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06037735849 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95308998797 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0053415145 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.75 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0833333333 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168899862282 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0581097265176 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0422001607691 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0950935439611 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0445593045224 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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