International travel is becoming cheaper, and countries are opening their doors to more and more tourists. Do the advantages of increased tourism outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, many countries are caring out the new approaches to attract more international tourists. This essay will shed some light on both pros and cos of it. I still to favour the advantages.
On the one hand. It is undeniable that increasing the number of tourists have some negative effects. Actually, the amount of harmful waste thrown into the environment will increase significantly if the number of tourist is increase. This increases the essential cost of garbage collection and disposal. As a result, the government have to pair more fee for this. As far as the second snag is concerned, many national tourists bring their local habits during the period and transfer to local communities, which make local citizens change their native cultures. Government can not preserve the local cultural identities which is great value of human.
Nevertheless, there are also many benefits to developing the size of tourism. In fact, thank to the increase in the size of tourism industry, purchasing power of the retail market is rising significantly. This leads to the fact that job requirement is improved about the quality and quantity especial in the service field such as souvenir market, transportation , hotel, restaurant. Therefore, The local economic is developed. The second merit is concerned, the point of views of government’s leaders are changed follow positive ways when they interact with international people instead their old solutions. Such as open mind, friendly, welcome. This is the factor responsible for development of local economic.
In conclusion, I still hold the belief that advantages overshadow the disadvantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 362, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... such as souvenir market, transportation , hotel, restaurant. Therefore, The local...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, if, nevertheless, second, so, still, therefore, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1392.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39534883721 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01462078253 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.643410852713 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.2610421709 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.3333333333 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3333333333 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177356227157 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0442936824344 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436071067433 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0909606731187 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0313598420116 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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