Many manufactured food and drink products contain high sugar levels ,which causes many health problems.Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar.
agree or disagree?
Many health problems are occurring mainly because of a rise in sugar levels and high sugar level is caused by excessive use of drink products and foods that are manufactured. It can be reduced by increasing the prices of these products so people find it hard to purchase these items. As far as my opinion is concerned, I strongly agree with the statement. In the forthcoming paragraphs, I will be explaining my point of view.
Most people find it easy to buy products that are detrimental to their health but they don’t care about the side effects of these products instead they get an addiction to using these items. Drink products like Pepsi,Coca Cola,Fanta,Sprite,Dew are quite common in our society and people are using these products frequently on many occasions. Guests are served these items, some people are using these beverages during dinner,lunch and even breakfast. Famous Athlete Cristiano Ronaldo put aside Coca Cola drinks during his press conference as he wanted to emphasize the importance of water and the harmful consequences of drink usage. After that step was taken by him, Coca Cola company suffered a huge loss.
Moreover, several food products like Lays,Wavy,crispy items also contain high sugar levels and these products are frequently used by adults and children. Many researchers have shown the abrupt rise of sugar levels in people in a recent couple of years and the death rate due to high levels of sugar has also increased. So If Government announces an increment in the prices of these products and beverages then it will become difficult for poor and middle-class families to purchase these products.
On the other hand, I am also aware of the scrumptious taste of these items and the enhancement of fun by utilizing these products but the cons of these products are more than the pros.
Wrapping it up, I reiterate the fact that these items are delving deep into our generation and steps should be taken to cut the increasing usage of these products.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Coca
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Line 2, column 227, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Fanta
...ems. Drink products like Pepsi,Coca Cola,Fanta,Sprite,Dew are quite common in our soci...
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Line 2, column 240, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Dew
...oducts like Pepsi,Coca Cola,Fanta,Sprite,Dew are quite common in our society and peo...
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Line 2, column 425, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , lunch
... are using these beverages during dinner,lunch and even breakfast. Famous Athlete Cris...
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Line 3, column 43, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Wavy
...oreover, several food products like Lays,Wavy,crispy items also contain high sugar le...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, then, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1659.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96706586826 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79096040856 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541916167665 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6800169134 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.5 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8571428571 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.71428571429 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297788567771 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109245675362 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111684921381 0.0667982634062 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170899759499 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108957566533 0.056905535591 191% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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