Task 2: It is expected that there will be a higher proportion of older people than that of young people in many countries in the future? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
It is anticipated that the percentage of the elderly population will be higher than the proportion of the younger generations. While this phenomenon can possess some notable benefits, I believe that several disadvantageous consequences will be also inevitable.
On the one hand, the excessive increment in the elderly population can lead to the ever-growing demand for widespread public healthcare services. It is incontrovertible that those who are getting older have more requirements for receiving medical attention. As a result, the national and local authorities will have to impose spending cuts or raise more taxes in order to allocate resources to expand healthcare systems. Moreover, nowadays, the elders tend to opt for private healthcare insurance because they suppose that they need to should an increasing financial burden regarding health bills. Some people also argue that the national welfare benefits are inadequate to guarantee well-qualified healthcare services when they are old.
On the other hand, it is worth noting that the reduction in the proportion of young generations also provides some notable advantages for society. From the environmental perspective, it is true that the decrease in young people means the global population will reduce. This tendency can reduce the required spaces for the construction of accommodations, eventually providing more habitats for species in the wild. In terms of the availability of occupations, thanks to the rapid evolution of leading-edge technology, many conventional jobs have been made obsolete by the numerous labor-saving appliances, which require fewer workforce. Therefore, the increase in the percentage of the youngster may lead to significant growth in unemployment, and more funding will be required to support these individuals.
In conclusion, although the growth of the elderly population can provide some benefits for society, I suppose that this can also lead to several detrimental influences on the environment and the younger populations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, well, while, i suppose, in conclusion, as a result, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1733.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.71947194719 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26126049521 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574257425743 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 553.5 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.395667765 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.307692308 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3076923077 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1538461538 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122021152864 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0498958361286 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567499985966 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0776610205976 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0606585941773 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.19 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.25 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.