Task 2: In many countries today, if people want to find a job, they have to move away from their friends and their families. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, people move to a new place in order to get a job. Some bevieve that it is a positive development. I totally concur with this opinion.
On the one hand, that living far from families and friends has a negative impact on their emotion. If they move away from their acquaintances and live in new places, they may feel lonely sometimes because it is hard for them to find a person they can confide in. Moreover, when they have difficulities in life and work, they need tackle these by themselves without any support from families, friends. That, hence, renders their feeling of loneliness happen more frequently.
On the other hand, people who live far away from their families and friends may have some advantages over others. First, moving to new places make them more independent and mature. To illustrate, they have to deal with all problems in their life such as seeking an accommodation, getting a job on their own. Although these are arduous tasks for them, they will have more experinces. The second merit is that they can broaden their networks. When they change their accommodation and get a new job, they can make friend with their neighborhoods, their co-workers and bosses. In the future, these relationships may be helpful.
In conclusion, living far from their families and friends to have a job is beneficial to people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, may, moreover, second, so, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1118.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 229.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88209606987 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70019460323 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572052401747 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 340.2 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.2191109811 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.5333333333 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2666666667 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73333333333 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.385531954961 0.244688304435 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127720546219 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0874632846561 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239608500484 0.151304729494 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0837402858314 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.43 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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