When new towns are planned, it is important to build more public parks or sports facilities than shopping centres for people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In recent years, every new metropolitan has been designed with a balance between eco-friendly and luxury environment. Some people argue that this new plan should construct public parks or sports facilities than shopping malls. I would completely agree with this statement, and I will support my ideas through the following paragraphs.
There are several convincing reasons for the designer to leave more place for public parks. To start with, stressed employees, school going children hit the park to relax themselves from their hectic day to day life routine. For many lower- class families, these parks act as a tourist spot as they are free of charge. Secondly, the most important problem all cities face now-a-days is air pollution, caused by the massive number of private vehicles. As per the research, the most common way to mitigate this issue by planting more trees. Parks with many trees will automatically contribute to reduce the air pollution.
Some people argue that constructing sports facilities than shopping malls has greater benefit to the individual as well as the country. With regards to the individual level, many people will not be able to recognize their own hidden talent, these sports center can be able to identify and enhance their talent to the next level with proper equipment and mentor. For instance, Natarajan who used to a street cricket player, was recognized, and guided by the state sport center coach, is now representing India. Let us consider, each sports center can be able to provide a single person in different sports categories, a country with more metropolitan can be able to produce more athletic, giving them a more chance to win a gold medal in Olympics.
In conclusion, the benefits from including a sport center or parks has several benefits to the citizens of the city than constructing a shopping mall, the best it can offer is a place for affluent people to hangout.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1612.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06918238994 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6739398855 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59748427673 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.5130817568 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.142857143 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7142857143 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247443594315 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0866637163325 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0838571294643 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151739972441 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0349893167574 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.