Many countries have most shops and product as the same.Consider it is a positive development, whereas other consider it is a negative development.Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
It is undeniable to state that globalisation is play paramount role to provide same products at every corner of the world.Most of the Nations have variety of goods and items as the similar in other countries.I assume that it is a positive development as it is a convenient way for buyer to buy international brands and there will no shortage of products.
To commence with positive development ,discrimination will decrease.When all international products are available in all countries, common people can buy easily owing to which they can become equal.To exemplify,from amazon all individuals can buy things easily which are suit to their pocket.In addition to this,business relation will incline with foreign countries.If all brands of other resions are available in poor countries,it will help to boost their economy. Eventually,Booming economy provide job opportunity to youngsters.
Moving further,it is a convenient way for purchaser to purchase things.As all international items are easily bought by individuals on one plateform,they can save their quality time.Consequently,they can use this time for other purpose.Moreover,due to worldwide trade there is no shortage of products.Eminent brands are available at each nearby shops and people cannot face difficulty to buy same thing at big amount .To epitome, prominent brand like Gucci and Addidas available in nearby places at huge amount. So,how it is a negative development if there is no shortage of items.
now discussing negative growth,diversity is disappearing in designs.Similar designs will found in different countries so people will have similar style.To cite an example,now days most of people buy addidas shoes which are similar design.What is more,there is big loss in local business. There are multifarious local brands are available in native country but individuals like to use foreign product which are inexpensive.As a result,local shops got closed and people went jobless.
To recapitulate, undoubtedly, worldwide business provided equality in variety products.Although diversity is disappearing in design,yet it is a convenient for buyer to buy variety of products.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, moreover, so, in addition, as a result, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1828.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.65944272446 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.67102774555 2.80592935109 131% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529411764706 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 593.1 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 20.2975951904 197% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 157.055274903 49.4020404114 318% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 228.5 106.682146367 214% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 40.375 20.7667163134 194% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.375 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 34.0 5.01903807615 677% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129246355279 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0650770029456 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533492033499 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0747415366418 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0523821656781 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.4 13.0946893788 194% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 13.96 50.2224549098 28% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.3 11.3001002004 188% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.44 12.4159519038 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.12 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.0 9.78957915832 317% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.1190380762 178% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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